Constructive Feedback

Our teachers, parents, and classmates gave us helpful feedback on our first film idea, which was a modern version of a traditional love triangle.

The value of creating representation in our film was one constant element. Although mental health and its effects on relationships were mentioned in our first draft, we saw a chance to go further into the varied experiences and viewpoints of our characters.

We want to take this feedback into account by going deeper into how our characters' identities are multifaceted, taking into account how aspects like sexual orientation, gender, and race influence their interactions and experiences.

A more exciting and captivating beginning part must also be included according to from comments on the pace of our first draft. We want to fix this by editing the script and focusing on writing a more captivating and thrilling opening that grabs the audience's attention right away.

We are now starting with the following pre-production stages in light of this feedback:

• Making a Comprehensive Shot List: To make sure that the scenes properly tell the story and increase the emotional impact, we are carefully organizing every scene, taking into account lighting, movement, and camera angles.
• Writing the Script: We are actively writing the script, taking into account the representation feedback with an emphasis on improving character development, improving the dialogue, and making sure the story flows naturally and captivatingly
• Planning the Production Schedule: We are planning out a detailed production schedule that allows for all required arrangements, such as casting, site searching, and setting up the dates for filming.
• Getting Required Props, Costumes, and Locations: In order to realize our goal, we have been searching for places, locating props, and organizing outfit ideas.

I am really looking forward to the next stage of production. We learned greatly from the feedback that we have received, and I am sure that by taking these recommendations into consideration and carefully organizing every stage, we will produce an engaging and strong  opening that will attract our audience as we show a variety of experiences in our story.